We decided to change parts of the opening 2 minutes, this is because in the draft the last 1 minute was just walking down a pathway, with nothing happening, so we decide to change it, we asked our teacher and asked what grade what we would get with our draft. Our teacher (Mrs Martin) told us and we started to make changes straight away. We decided to get rid of the last minute and added a minute at the start of the film, this was because the last minute was bringing our marks down. We added the minute at the start of Emma in a graveyard looking over her friends grave, and holding a picture of Emma and her friend (Bryony), and we got Emma to read a letter and added a voice over of Emma reading the letter, to give it a more freaky effect.
We also added sound to the video to give it a more freaky effect. For this we used a Electric Piano/Keyboard, this would enable us to get a whole range of different sounds and we searched through the sounds until we found a more scarier sound. We made a piece which Bryony composed and it was really effective. Then added it to the final piece.
We also added a sound of Emma screaming from when her face changes from normal to scary, this gave it a more scarier and effective feel to it once it was in the first 2 minutes.
We hope that this would've boosted our grade/marks up, as this has been vastly improved since our draft and made it more scarier.
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